No Whimsy, Sugar (taste_is_sweet) wrote,
No Whimsy, Sugar

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Things I Love About Editing, Part One of Probably a Million

kh'Wen screamed in anger and pain, then hammered her feet like hammers into u'Taita's belly.

::facepalm:: You have no idea how many freaking times I've been over this scene. No idea.

Hammered her feet like hammers. Now that's some talent! Yee-hah!

::slinks off in shame::
Tags: adventures in editing, my novel which is going to kill me, oops, writing
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